Category Archives: editing

scis­sors and paste

There’s a kind of archae­ology in the edit­ing pro­cess. Hav­ing fin­ished a rough first draft of The Last Monk about three weeks ago, I’ve spent much of the inter­ven­ing time read­ing and re-reading the entire manu­script, pick­ing out everything from typos and bad gram­mar, through inel­eg­ant sen­tence struc­ture to the high-end nar­rat­ive and char­ac­ter lines which should drive the book.

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Small, green plastic frogs

Due to recent advances, I can now reveal the first and last line of The Last Monk. It begins with ‘The house is sud­denly filled with music’, and ends with the words ‘small, green plastic frogs’.

It’s a philo­soph­ical piece, obviously.

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Tempt­ing hats, kinky chairs and reverse-somersaulting climaxes

I’ve spent much of the last three weeks inform­ing the reader (also the spouse, the neigh­bour and the teen-aged sales assist­ant at J.B. HiFi) of my rev­el­a­tion that before I could type a single word of the grand cli­max of The Last Monk, time would be required to per­col­ate, to mull, and gen­er­ally to walk around parks scowl­ing at ducks in the vain hope that someone would ask me what I was look­ing so thought­ful about.

Quite a bit of time, I thought. About a fortnight. 

As it hap­pens, it took about six hours.

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The con­sult­ant in the fruit box

I did some quick sums a couple of days ago and real­ised that my final act is now sev­enty pages long, and I haven’t even got to the really excit­ing bit yet.

This gave me an excuse to do some­thing I’ve always enjoyed, which is edit­ing in widescreen. Because there’s a lot of mater­ial, and the changes I anti­cip­ated would most likely involve shuff­ling big chunks of text around, the best way to do it is to print the whole thing out, spread it out on the floor and scan it from a dis­tance to let the large-scale struc­tures reveal themselves.

Here then is what my liv­ing room floor looked like this morning:

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